Ten Writing Mistakes Writers Often Make

May 11, 2009

I recently came across this list on a blog titled “Holt Uncensored.” The author provides a helpful list of 10 frequent writing mistakes. Unlike other lists regarding this topic, this one provides unique advice which is actually helpful. Here’s an example:

6. THE “TO BE” WORDS

Once your eye is attuned to the frequent use of the “to be” words – “am,” “is,” “are,” “was,” “were,” “be,” “being,” “been” and others – you’ll be appalled at how quickly they flatten prose and slow your pace to a crawl…

Not so long ago, “it was” *defined* emphasis. Even now, if you want to say, “It was Margaret who found the gun,” meaning nobody else but Margaret, fine. But watch out – “it was” can be habitual: “It was Jack who joined the Million Man March. It was Bob who said he would go, too. But it was Bill who went with them.” Flat, flat, flat.

I’m a big fan of ditching “to be” verbs (although here I’ve used at least 2 or 3) as I feel like their absence significantly improves the quality and flow of the writing. Holt provides a bunch of other good advice, so go check it out. If you have any other similar tips, share them in the comments.

Link: The Ten Mistakes (Holt Uncensored)

HT: Scot McKnight

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